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the fire in your hand
Contributed by
needs_change
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Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 08:14:35 PM in AEST
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this paper is about to rip
it's so heavy with the truth
if these words could really kill
thier first victim would be you
when you don't hear the hopeless cries
when you can lie into thier eyes
that's when your know you already dead
that someone wants a gun to your head
when you can tell the smiles are fake
(this paper is so close to tearing)
that's when they give up
(there is no point in caring)
when you hold the power
it's inside you fist
that's when you never know
the joys that you might miss
this paper is a fire
burning with the truth
this paper is a fire
and it's burning up with you
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Re: the fire in your hand
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by ruby_dreamer on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 02:52:39 AM AEST
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| Wow...such hate. I think of one of those upper floor rooms bursting into flames from the heat of the fire below. I love this one. |
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Re: the fire in your hand
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by EverlastingDawn on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 07:58:44 PM AEST
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Amazing poem. It would be a really good song too. Such beautiful imagery. The emotion so overwhelming (in a good way). The truth in your poems is what makes your writing so great. Nice Write.
~Dawn |
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