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Take Me Away
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 02:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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O take me away
O take me away
Take me away from this place
O take me away
O take me away
Until I see your face
Take me far away
Take me somewhere new
Where I can start again
And be who I chose
I said take me away
Take me somewhere else
Take me to a place
Where I can be myself
I need a place
Where I can go
To help me out
And help me know
Who I am
And why Im here
To figure out
And wash away my fear
Take me far away
Take me somewhere new
Where I can start again
And be who I chose
I said take me away
Take me somewhere else
Take me to a place
Where I can be myslef
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2005-11-27 14:57:57]
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Re: Take Me Away
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 03:27:56 PM AEST
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wow!! that was great, i really loved that!!! and yes, i've been in that position b-4 where you just want to go away. you expressed yourself really great, and i sorta got the tune, except i'm listening to another song, so it was kinda hard... lol. but it was great and i liked how you did it! great job!! keep it up!!
~sprints
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Re: Take Me Away
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:45:34 PM AEST
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great expression
who doesnt feel that way sometimes?
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