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Money Can't But These
Contributed by
sunkyst0608
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Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 08:41:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Money can't buy the new red bracelets I got today.
It was a painful bargain though.
But, at the same price, I felt nothing.
See, first you find a reasonable excuse to be angery at yourself,
Then you get to pick how to make them, either razor or knife.
I perfer the razor, it makes a cleaner cut.
I have a lot of red bracelets.
Some deep red, some so old they've faded.
My bracelets tell a story, but at a feeling's price.
Pain is just part of the physical process.
It is the emotional part that counts anyway.
"Why do you get red bracelets?" typical people ask.
I answer, "it doesn't come in any other color."
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Re: Money Can't But These
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by coolbreeze17 on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 11:57:29 PM AEST
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| very creative and emotional |
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Re: Money Can't But These
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by Spike on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 03:58:54 AM AEST
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Confronting and creative -I don't recall having seen self-mutilation (cutting) presented as a bloody adornment or as a fashion accessory for the suicidal. And well done - the last line was particularly good (but check your spelling).
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Re: Money Can't But These
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by rebel_son on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 06:34:31 PM AEST
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good poem i know just where you are comming from
you should check out mutiny_outlaw i think youd like his poems
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