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Chills of Winter
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Those walks I take so late at night,
The coolness of a winters bite,
To whom the forest whispers loud,
My view of winters waltzing sight.
The glistening crystals glaze the cloud,
With clattered dancing sleet so proud,
And swhirling snows celestial tease,
With sounds of winters chime endowed.
The blowing winds,and frigid freeze,
My warmth is gone with winters squeeze,
The wooded path to home I see,
With biting frost the grip did seize.
Release the hold,and set me free,
Inside the warmth of home with she,
The winter yearns with calling me,
And wind of winter sighs with glee.
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Re: Chills of Winter
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 06:01:47 PM AEST
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A pleasure to read Wesley, with some vivid imagery. It's good to be reading your work once more.
Chrissie x
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Re: Chills of Winter
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by Lia on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 07:37:01 PM AEST
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| ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! loved it loved it loved it. I actually sat here and shivered from the cold while reading this.... |
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Re: Chills of Winter
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by KiEme on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 10:26:51 AM AEST
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| Recently I wrote a poem about appreciating nature even in the cold. Now, in the bitter cold, I take it back. |
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Re: Chills of Winter
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:01:36 AM AEST
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| sounds like you favor winter..even though it's cold, you enjoy the look and feel of it...do you really take late night walks? |
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Re: Chills of Winter
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:12:13 AM AEST
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| very beautifully written! and i'm glad you have someone that loves you!! your very lucky... |
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Re: Chills of Winter
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 12:37:17 PM AEST
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| Excellent |
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