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Reality Check
Contributed by
Lia
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Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Standing on the edge of goodbye
Pushing past this fairy tale lie
Screaming through a past unknown
Caring none how far it's grown
Reaching through a soul half crushed
Climbing, clinging breathes unhushed
Crying tears of a burning fate
Can't slip through that golden gate
Chapped lips urge words of scorn
Wondering where this dream was born
Pale blue eyes drown in tears
Overflowing teeming fears
Clever clues left to dust
Simple outcast made to trust
Down this path my life must lead
And I shall do my destined deed...
Copyright ©
Lia
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2003-01-23 18:00:00]
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Re: Reality Check
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by SusieQ on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 06:16:48 PM AEST
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| Lia! I think Reality Check is a good one. It came from a higher power, I suppose. SusieQ |
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Re: Reality Check
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by OreO on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 12:37:24 AM AEST
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Somehow i get the feeling that this poem has such an amazing deep story behind it....this is so beautiful....and so deeply written from your heart...it's very full of pain, and hurt...yet ther are so many other feelings here as well...this is a beautiful write Lia....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Reality Check
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:16:29 PM AEST
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| brilliant write.. |
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Re: Reality Check
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:04:11 PM AEST
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| this is the type of poem i would put up in my home for all to see... i love it... blessings... |
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