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Untitled II
Contributed by
jmpy84
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Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 12:53:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I see you ignite a fire in me
We belong together and you know its true
This I will promise you
I will cherish you for as long as I live
I will always give you what I have to give
You should already know how much I love you
My one wish is that you feel the same way too
Please tell me if you do make this dream real
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2005-11-28 00:53:50]
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Re: Untitled II
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 01:25:24 AM AEST
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very straightfoward heart felt and simply u,
i think she'll get the message, lovely peice of writting.
Ben |
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Re: Untitled II
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by sandypoet on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 04:59:00 AM AEST
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you feel a spark there. They must feel the same way or wouldn't treat you that way. so have faith they love you to. I love the line.....
everyone of them... great write. |
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Re: Untitled II
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 03:25:48 PM AEST
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Short, sweet and always so heartfelt.
Keep up the great work Josh. May you share a lifetime of love and happiness together.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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