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Love at night
Contributed by
philly
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Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 01:29:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My love that will not die
Defy fate tis a lie
Tis a bird without wings
Wingless love yearns to fly
Love returned there shall be none
The lover loved by no one
My tears shall fall of sadness
Yet my love is not undone
Miserable love is love still
Eternity is in love's will
Though love shall be sorrow destined
It shall not die at sorrows chill
No less a love no greater than this
For such a love lives and needs no kiss
Needs no embrace, no words, no other
But alone tis beautiful tis bliss
Though loved not I, I shall love all the more
Without her I know love is to long for
Without her I learn what it is- this love
Had I never loved or learned to adore
Tis as though I never learned to speak or see
Tis as though I never learned to live- to be
But to love and to know love- is to know life
Broken, still I love when she doesnt love me
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Re: Love at night
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 01:41:03 AM AEST
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| awwwwwwww this was sad ,,, nice poem.. |
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Re: Love at night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 01:53:31 AM AEST
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Its sad...gr8 write :)
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Re: Love at night
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by Without_Hope on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 02:27:22 AM AEST
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| wow, impressive. I love the rythem to the poem, and the way the rhymes are set up. I also love the way your wrote your words, and what words you wrote. Great job, I loved it. Keep up the amazing work. |
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Re: Love at night
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by sandypoet on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 04:55:04 AM AEST
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| better then to love then never loved at all. you said it all. what I liked about your poem is this.. That no matter what. love is important and you felt it. you would like it to be returned. but bottom line.. you loved. |
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Re: Love at night
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by ruby_dreamer on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 06:50:33 AM AEST
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| You've captured it perfectly. The feeling of knowing love and yet not receiving it in return...amazing! I like your analogy of a wingless bird. |
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