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who am i
Contributed by
sweetpixiegrl
on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 07:37:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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who am i
i laugh
when i want to cry
i smile
when i want to die
i stay
when i want to go
i lie
so they will not know
i run
so no one inquires
i write
to keep up my desires
i cry
to cleanse my soul
i pray
to make me whole
i sleep
to avoid my peers
i hide
so they dont see my tears
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sweetpixiegrl
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2005-11-28 07:37:04]
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Re: who am i
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lin54 on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 07:14:03 PM AEST
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I'm touched
because I know!
You captured the feelings beautifully!
I love it!
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Re: who am i
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by PureAmethyst on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:09:24 AM AEST
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| This is very beautiful. There is so much emotion in this and i can tell it runs deep, good work with this :) x |
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