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Pathetic
Contributed by
His_Infernal_Majesty
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Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 11:32:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Beatened, bruised and left for dead.
Battered and bleeding from the head.
Blood stained shirt, once white is now red.
What a failure, he failed to protect her.
He tried his best; he should of done better.
Failed to protect her from those dirty, sick men.
Hours later and she returns to the bodies side.
The anger inside, grows like a storm and the tide.
Everything she went through, all the consequences.
How brave she was, and yet how pathetic can I be?
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2005-11-28 11:32:44]
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Re: Pathetic
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 09:20:30 PM AEST
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woh powerful and sad.
nice write |
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Re: Pathetic
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by Ice_Fox on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:32:27 PM AEST
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Hmm, this is quite nice...
You're not alone in the world of unstoppable anger.
I look forward to reading more of your work |
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