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A FATHERS BETRAIL
Contributed by
StoneAngel
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Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 04:52:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wish I had a father
who was there all the time
but all I had was a ghost of one
that left when i was 2
you drank and smoked a lot
you even beat my mom
now after all these years of absence
You disown me via email
All I did was ask some questions
and you left me for the wolves
what a horrible father you have been
disowning me before you knew
all the horrible things that happend
I dreamed of the day we would first meet
that day came 5 years ago
you don't know what it was like
Without a father to look out for me
I cryed every night for one
I even prayed to god
I longed for one to appear
to sweep me away from the mess
but you never came
I wasn't even on ur mind
When you left the scene
But now I am
And the first thing you do
Is Disown ME
Copyright ©
StoneAngel
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2005-11-28 16:52:36]
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Re: A FATHERS BETRAIL
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by ruby_dreamer on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 07:12:15 PM AEST
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| Your hurt is so evident here...this poem is terribly sad. I can feel that you have been betrayed here...excellent expressions. |
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Re: A FATHERS BETRAIL
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by StoneAngel on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 03:25:43 PM AEST
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| How do I read comment people posted about my poems. |
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