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Searching for.....
Contributed by
BEBE
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Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 11:49:44 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Searching for peace, happiness, love and hope
I dream to escape the pain the world brings
I hope for purpose and a meaningful life
I smile to get out of saying my true feelings
I cry to get my mind off of pain
I am lost.Lonely.depressed and hopless
No need to say anything else
Im the only one who can fix my broken heart
My dream is to be loved and to be somewhere, where i can be loved
Copyright ©
BEBE
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2005-11-28 23:49:44]
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Re: Searching for.....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 03:48:29 AM AEST
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Awesomely expressed random thoughts. It is a sad write well written. I think we all have that dream and can relate. The hope you show is a positive thing. So yet sad it ends IMHO on a positive note.
Thank you for sharing and take care.
Tim
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Re: Searching for.....
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by Ice_Cold_Crayons on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 11:19:58 PM AEST
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| Really good, That is somewhat the way I am feeling right now. |
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Re: Searching for.....
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 06:12:02 PM AEST
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great thoughts indeed
peach |
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Re: Searching for.....
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 11:53:38 AM AEST
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Thank you, Bebe, for reading Come! Let Us Create Peace. Your 'Just Some Random Thoughts' is well expressed. Many of us can relate with you. Isn't poetry a wonderful therapy? ... and a wonderful way to fulfill the purpose of giving love, hope, encouragement?
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Re: Searching for.....
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by lilmom101 on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 11:26:58 AM AEST
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| this was nice |
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