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Hourglass
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 02:52:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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the headlights went off abruptly
seatbelts unfastened in my blink
eyes open-still blind
love is the hourglass of honesty
rough hands to hold and demand
what night will withstand ?
the memories
love is the hourglass of brutality
endure what becomes of me
i tell myself
you decide who you are
where you fall
and how damn far
love is the hourglass of determination
how quickly have i come
to lay it all down
how soft do i seap into you?
too gently
love is the hourglass of desperation
there is nothing but this moment
and the plague of your touch
the incessant battles
and rivalry
forget it
just forget it
love is the hourglass of inevitablility
now lock your doors
roll those windows up tight
drive "home"
take heed of tonight
love is the hourglass of finality
shattered reflection
we have been a long time in meeting
the face-so ready-
for the words
love is the hourglass of inspiration
you never taught me love
heretic!
by error
through the many faces
through the many hourglasses
filled and emptied
i now see
love is: HONESTY, BRUTALITY, DETERMINATION, DESPERATION, INEVITABLITY, FINALITY AND INSPIRATION.
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weepingprophet
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2005-11-29 02:52:09]
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Re: Hourglass
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by Rdelarme on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 03:26:27 AM AEST
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| This is the best poem ive seen on here so far. |
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Re: Hourglass
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by sweetpixiegrl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:25:43 AM AEST
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very very thought provoking... i have never seen this type of poetry but i LOVE it. it makes me think. kudo's to you! cant wait to read more.
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Re: Hourglass
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by brew on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:04:58 PM AEST
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yes it can be an hourglass.because with time, things grow........then narrow(which could be, un-or not blossoming) then back to the full effect. Very substance write.
Brew~ |
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