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Does it scare you.....
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
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Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:49:17 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Does it scare you...
If its loud and in your face?
Do you think your ready...
To live a unsteady pace
To see things a new...
From what your not used to...
Drive that nail deep into your skull
Touch the nerve you leave so dull...
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2005-11-29 07:49:17]
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Re: Does it scare you.....
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by sweetpixiegrl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:12:43 AM AEST
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| not that this is a bad thing but it left me wondering " where is the rest of the poem"? |
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Re: Does it scare you.....
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 03:47:39 AM AEST
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i agree this feels like an exerpt from a bigger poem, this could be built on alot more...but it is yours to do with as you please.
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