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goodbye cruel world
Contributed by
cashncoe
on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 05:19:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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life is a game i'll never win
i say to myself
as the blade slices my skin
i still have hope so they say
god knows they are wrong
i lost all the hope that i had
when dad sang his goodbye song
i just cant take it anymore
i say to myself
as blood trickles to the floor
the music starts to fade
and the night turns to black
soon i ll have it made
ridding in that long cadillac
with all the hope in the world ill still never win
heavon knows how i've tried
you can call me a quitter call me a coward
but im committing suicide
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cashncoe
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2005-11-30 17:19:10]
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Re: goodbye cruel world
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by sararose1950 on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 05:47:04 PM AEST
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well written- I am sure many share the anguish of your words- hopefully will find joy.
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