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In Favor of Lies
Contributed by
Dri
on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:32:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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if its a lie you want to hear
just flick a coin and Ill come out
with a believable story
I never wanted anyone other than you
I wasnt in love with him when we met
if this makes it through the phone
just dont hang up and leave me alone
a blonde boy on the end of the line
says
I know where it hurts, let me
see where it hurts
but the air is too cold to strip right here
because its my body thats aching its
my body thats sore
its the skin
he laced with poison heat
until the air was thick and the whole
stretch became just too tight for me
so Ill tell you a lie to ease your pain
I didnt take you just to save me, I
didnt indulge
I didnt let you belong to me just
to get the scent of him out of my sheets
or the feel of him out of my head
Copyright ©
Dri
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2005-11-30 18:32:25]
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Re: In Favor of Lies
(User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 02:10:58 AM AEST
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such a refreshing style it was unique and i enjoyed it. I like simplicity in a personal write it makes it much more passionate. Some of the lines painted very descriptive pictures of events peppered with emotions. It is always releiving to see something new and pure. The entire piece was inspiring, refreshing and simply spectacular.
~give me a day to remember-before i erase you- the way we were, the man i loved. your hands inside of me, breath hot with desire because inevitably i will strike the match and light a fire to liquify every sacred promise and every hollow regret~weepingprophet |
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Re: In Favor of Lies
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by enigma on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 02:36:44 PM AEST
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...this one left me with cloaked feelings and I don't want to clutter my thoughts with words...
ron...enigma |
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