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Blue Mist
Contributed by
Raidne
on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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At six am I awake
Cork my chance into a blue mist wine bottle
And throw it over the edge of a ship
Whose geography changes constantly
Thrown into the chaotic ocean waves
For another sailor to find
A chance I didn't need
And never wanted
This is a metaphor
For everything I've thrown away
Eyes wide open
And heart understanding
What I want
Is not this chance
I have corked into a blue mist bottle
But a chance I want some other traveller to have
Copyright ©
Raidne
... [
2003-01-23 21:00:00]
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Re: Blue Mist
(User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 09:27:20 AM AEST
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| hey, this is intresting, a little complicated for my mind to understand considering i cant understand alot of things, hehe, (its not your poem, just me!) i enjoyed it. it had depth of ponderment in it. its unique, thanks for sharing it. |
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