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he's not breathing
Contributed by
brokenheartsbleed
on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:33:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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This isnt right, its not how its supposed to be.
Were supposed to be true.
But all I see are lies cast in the shadows of broken dreams.
Angels fly with broken wings through the midnight sky to rescue me.
My mind screams out but suffocation stops me.
Breathe in the agony, pain, and defeat.
Weakness was always my true kryptonite.
Im fading fast as time goes by.
My mind is shot and I didnt even say goodbye.
Ill drown my fears as I stop breathing.
Rescue me from these feelings.
Darkness conveys the corners of this cage I feel trapped in.
I want to be free but Im not breathing.
Hes not breathing.
Hes not breathing.
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brokenheartsbleed
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2005-12-01 00:33:18]
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Re: he's not breathing
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by ruby_dreamer on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 01:17:18 AM AEST
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Oh my God...***stands up and applauds you** So good...must save...
Your words are so well crafted. I salute you. |
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Re: he's not breathing
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by Skinney86 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 01:38:14 AM AEST
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| Great write, your words are well put.. I applaude you! |
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Re: he's not breathing
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by tiggytom on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:41:05 AM AEST
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I liked this, love your style, keep it up
thnx
tom |
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Re: he's not breathing
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by hellsfallenangel on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:05:27 PM AEST
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this is a good but sad but keep writing
DEMON |
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