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I Love You........ Yet, I Hate You
Contributed by
hippie
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 06:52:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love the way you make me smile,
They way you say you care,
I love the little things you do,
I love it that youre always there.
I hate the way my life has changed,
The way you pull away,
The way Im not allowed to see my friends,
You want me with you each and every day.
I love the way you care for me,
The way you make me feel,
I feel all warm and loved up,
But Im not so sure this is real.
I hate the way you scare me,
The way you talk about my family,
When Ive been with my friends,
You always give me the third degree.
I love it when you say to me
I love you more every day,
But Im beginning to feel suffocated,
Im not so sure its meant to be this way.
I hate the way I cant talk to you,
The way that you dont listen,
The way that you dont back down,
You never admit youre beaten.
I love the way it used to be,
I really thought it was going to be right,
I thought wed be together you and me,
But now all we do is fight.
I hate the way your temper flares,
The way you act on drink,
The way some days I wake up,
And I feel my heart just sink.
I love the way you text me,
Or call me on the phone,
But Im feeling trapped,
And very, very alone.
I hate the way you put me down,
You dont realise how much I hurt,
But it cuts deep down inside,
At times you must think Im dirt.
You know I really love you,
But I think its time we had a talk,
This time if you dont listen,
Im going to have to walk.
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hippie
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2005-12-01 06:52:13]
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Re: I Love You........ Yet, I Hate You
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by hauge9 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 06:56:58 AM AEST
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| good contrast switching up the love and the hate parts, good at showing how you can feel both at once, a little parts don't flow very smoothly, but overall it gets the point across well |
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Re: I Love You........ Yet, I Hate You
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by tiggytom on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 08:51:54 AM AEST
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I thought this was great, a tale from start to finish the thoughts one has when in a relationship.
thnx
tom |
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