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DIEING WORLD
Contributed by
hellsfallenangel
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 09:57:39 AM in AEST
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This world is full of hate this world is full of deceat.
Pain and suffering are all it knows.
This world is dieing exploding at the core.
This world is spinning out of control never to be the same again.
why oh why do we like destroying everything we hold dear to us. W
Our friends our loved ones are going to die never to be saved. O
This world is dieing so just forget about us.
Copyright ©
hellsfallenangel
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2005-12-01 09:57:39]
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Re: DIEING WORLD
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by tiggytom on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:42:58 PM AEST
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I like the thinking behind this, dying are the forgotten.
Thnx
Tom
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Re: DIEING WORLD
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:31:37 PM AEST
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You should correct your spelling errors, especially in the title, they detract from the overall feel of the poem.
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Re: DIEING WORLD
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 05:23:41 PM AEST
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Wow tha'ts quite the perception of the world .
As harsh and cold as the Wars and the Climates makes it seem. It is a matter of the Human race , survial , that keeps us from throssing in the towel.
Stay Strong Keep the faith
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