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Emancipation
Contributed by
desolated_denial
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:59:27 PM in AEST
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A freedom desist A holy ground fell Tattered paper flows through my mind.
A father's betrayal A mother's turned back Tattered paper flows through my mind.
A worthy cause For the lowliest of men A cause that was damned from the moment it began A worthless sentiment My worthless voice One that never stood a chance in the halls of your distain
A single tear Wiped a slate clean Until the next time cluttered ...
... A father's betrayal A mother's turned back Tattered paper flows through my mind
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Re: Emancipation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lashing_Tongue on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:18:13 PM AEST (User
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Not a bad poem, but very vauge. Perhaps you wished it to be such?
Best Wishes,
Jackie |
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