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love or lust?
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 09:03:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I think about him everyday
the thoughts bring me to tears
for i think i love him
but people say its lust
him and I are so far apart
but, I feel him with me
he doesnt know how I feel about him
every time we talk I get butterflies
and Im nervous
I always thought the true me never gets nervous
or has any feelings like this
he took my heart and he unraveled my feelings
as he takes them apart
he doesnt know
he doesnt know he hurts me with every word
he says about her,the other girl
he rips my heart out and plays with it
says he used to love me
but what about now
Im sure your over me
thats why I cant tell you
about all these feelings I keep inside of me
there hidden away so that not even I could find them
I pretend like I dont feel this way for you
but deep inside I know
what I dont know is
it love or lust?
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Re: love or lust?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 08:24:18 AM AEST
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it is a beautiful poem spoken from the heart that's what it is and u wrote it as only u could a true peice of rare emotion in this day and age. beautifly done dee.
(((((dee)))))
Ben
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Re: love or lust?
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by angel_eyes70 on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 02:31:18 PM AEST
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| heyy, great write!!! I just can't seem to figure out who its about lol, Jay? or Dallas? lol....well I don't know well I loved it Dee! it was awsome! well I guess thats all for now (L)(K) |
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