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underneath the stars
Contributed by
cherylleighh
on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:14:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you and me
on a blanket
underneath the stars
its so beautiful
but not as beautiful
as the love in our hearts
we lay there looking up
at a million stars in the sky
i'm cuddled up in your arms
and the time is slowly going by
it's so peaceful
being there with you
just you and me
under a big sky full of stars
and a big bright full moon
you tell me of the love
you have for me
as i lie there looking at you
and listening to you speak
now we're kissing
and you're touching me softly
your touch feels so good
as i ask you to make love to me
then later as we leave our place of love
for the night
i think how lucky i am
to have you in my life
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cherylleighh
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2005-12-02 00:14:48]
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Re: underneath the stars
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:41:30 AM AEST
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A romantically beautiful write. I love the stars and the night sky. Always so magical and enthralling. A great enjoybable poem. well done.
*hugs*
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