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Heightened Emotions
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 01:50:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Can't seem to control
this urge
to press on the gas
around this curve
to wonder...
What it would feel like
to sail in this confining
metal box
high off this mountain top
Follow the mist
tree tops clipped
air cool
flying free
Look At Me
Realization slaps
the daunting face
as synapses fire
dead space
Fears rise like bile
in my throat
burning me
What the hell...
not a bit of bravery
in this freak
It's the landing, man
that I just can't conceive
Laura Horner
Penned 11-18-05
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deadheadpoet
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2005-12-02 01:50:50]
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Re: Heightened Emotions
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by ruby_dreamer on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 02:18:12 AM AEST
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| This is brilliant! Such struggle you have catagorized this as is evident. I love the incomplete sentences and the train-of-thought-like presentation. May I save? |
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Re: Heightened Emotions
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 07:02:25 PM AEST
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Laura this is a very well written piece of poetry. You have done a great job on it.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Heightened Emotions
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 07:33:56 PM AEST
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You really did great on this write. You bring you emotions to life with great imagery.
But alas...my favorite part was the ending.
So glad to hear that It's the landing, man
that I just can't conceive.
Somebody somewhere always loves you.
Take care and thanks for sharing.
Tim
:-)
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Re: Heightened Emotions
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by Shmokin on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 04:06:08 AM AEST
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| thought i'd have a look through ur work, u've done tons! and so far (only on me 2nd) they seem fresh, new, well scripted and most of all very enjoyable :-) |
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