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Hope It Dont Snow
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
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I look out of my window,the sun glistens on the snow,
little children playing there face a rosey glow,
I hear there squeals of laughter,
as they ride on home made sleigh's..
I think.....Please God make it melt away,
I really hate snow, cant see whats all the fuss,
as I watch the children playing, pray it turns to slush..
I know it sounds nasty all the things iv'e said,
but last time we had snow, I slipped and broke my leg..
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2005-12-02 13:40:00]
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Re: Hope It Dont Snow
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 01:55:53 PM AEST
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| short n to the point!! snow isnt so bad its the cold that does it that slush ur praying for will just turn to ice or something snow isnt half bad sorry u broke ur leg just watch ur step next time!! |
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Re: Hope It Dont Snow
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 09:02:34 PM AEST
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| hee hee Sorry about your fractured leg, but the the poem did give me a giggle. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Hope It Dont Snow
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 08:33:10 AM AEST
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| Sorry Lillyjane but I love the snow! I hate it when it turns to slosh and looks dirty but when it's falling fresh from the sky and settling as a big white blanket I love it! I love crunching through it in wellies! A very funny write though and it has to be said that the white stuff is dangerous! |
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Re: Hope It Dont Snow
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by maestar on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 07:04:47 AM AEST
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| funny, the snow is sometimes dangerous but I love it. |
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