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Letting Go Of Stars
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 02:35:05 PM in AEST
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Give me night
And I will no longer
Need the stars
For when a Poet lowers his voice
To say - with quiet, yet glorious certainty-
That we were meant to be something more
The Moon cannot help but listen
And Time cannot forget us -
Standing still, so still!, with our toes
Dangling over the edge of tomorrow.
~ ~ ~
The Moon beckons
And I turn my face to the sky
~ ~ ~
In the stillness of the night-
Words tumble from the sky, falling
In silence like a lovers gentle kiss
Under the Moons watchful eye
I push aside exhausted purples
To sing of the Poet that dared the night
And let go the stars to find a dream
Oh! Give me night
It is it alone
That I need
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Silent-No-More
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2005-12-02 14:35:05]
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Re: Letting Go Of Stars
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by Spike on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 12:50:11 AM AEST
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MMmmm!! That was like imbibing in a sweet, smooth dessert, or swimming without needing to breathe in long, sensuous strokes. Simply a delight to open your surprises. And what lines:
Standing still, so still!, with our toes
Dangling over the edge of tomorrow.
They send a thrill up my spine. A 5-er, no doubt, oh yeah (hands in the air, doing a very poor white man's imitation of hip hop gestures).
Spike
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Re: Letting Go Of Stars
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by brokenheartsbleed on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 01:16:09 AM AEST
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| wow this is awesome. i hope someday i can write like this. |
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Re: Letting Go Of Stars
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 04:13:34 PM AEST
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Beautiful images, most definitely. The message is very inspiring, as well. I must ponder on it, I think.
Andrew |
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Re: Letting Go Of Stars
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 06:31:46 AM AEST
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Wow, you write so beautifully. Brilliant and delightful. I must read it again and again, I say.
Thank you.
Tim
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Re: Letting Go Of Stars
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:02:36 PM AEST
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Save one star ... i think. Cuz even when you find tomorrow, there should still remain in it dreams and hopes and wishes. A fabulous sentiment though, and penned quite well. Here's wishing you a lifetime of dreams and the knowing that they can come true.
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