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Handcuffs and Hesitation
Contributed by
Dri
on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 02:49:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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give me the friction
give me more than you
could bite off of this
make it what youve feared
and I wont hesitate to slash
at what time weve spent
I wont hesitate at confrontation
and I wont try and
listen, wont stop at lie
tie you down
what could a pair
of handcuffs mean to you
when the question sat on you lips?
trying not to trust my never failed
instinct
tell me, gentle reader, have
you ever sat on the drive home
watching the lights dance
on the granite of his face
and known inside
that it wasnt going to end well?
it ended unwell and I
cant leave it alone
god hes a hole of a man
buried and stone
with the handsome darkness
that Id come to associate with male
the way he watched
with the heels, five inch black
and the dress that quickly made
its self known and the smile on his
face like hed love a meal of it
you know exactly what Im
trying to say here
the power is addictive
and it was so good but it
was so bad and
I knew it from day one
we werent going to be able
to be adult about this
ending
Copyright ©
Dri
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2005-12-02 14:49:13]
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Re: Handcuffs and Hesitation
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 03:03:33 PM AEST
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| was an ok write but i just didnt get it flat out!! lol |
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Re: Handcuffs and Hesitation
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 09:31:58 PM AEST
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Holy hell. The way you write . . . god.
I'm just going to say this was amazing, like all of your others are amazing but not *like* them, because it's unique and with its own flavor and incredible and . . . meh, I'll shut up now.
Nice job, twinnish one. |
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Re: Handcuffs and Hesitation
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by Jessie53067 on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 02:54:33 PM AEST
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As I was reading this, this line hit me really hard in the gut:
the power is addictive
Well, actually the whole thing hit me hard. It puts into words feelings that I've been having but haven't been able to express...I really see my 'relationship' mirrored back in this poem.
Amazing, truelly amazing. |
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Re: Handcuffs and Hesitation
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by travisk on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 09:46:00 PM AEST
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nice flow, ability to describe, imagery
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