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I am
Contributed by
suprasurfer
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Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 03:42:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am that is faster than light im the darkness light pierces blood flows not from me but to me I wilt in happiness covered in the sands of time the hourglass always turning causing my world to be always yet never a righted wrong
does time run out or just in circles a never ending pendulum swinging us to distant shores beyond that of the minds eye for I see them calling to me with their and your souls reaching but never grasping my concept too complex your cerebral cortex explodes leaving millions of stars now I gaze
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Re: I am
(User Rating: 1 ) by SageofHalo123330 on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 06:17:44 PM AEST (User
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its such a beautiful self expression. i love the use of images. they work perfectly. |
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Re: I am
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 08:30:22 PM AEST (User
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I Liked the flow of this poem. keep up the good work! |
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