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...that One Day on the Red Hills...
Contributed by
chibimiroku
on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:19:26 AM in AEST
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That One Day on the Red Hills
I stand a single pedestrian
Centered in a crowded street
Yet I see no other people
Nor hear the pat of shoed feet.
I try to pierce the ring of cloud
That hovers around, forever blocking my view
For as I step, it steps with me
This large tinted lens from my glasses askew.
My feet follow a path my eyes cannot see
My eyes see images my mind cannot comprehend
My glimpses are of people, places, events;
This influx of color seems to have no end.
I stop and ponder a moment
About this road, with no scenery or sky
I step back in wonder and realize
That this is my life, passing me by.
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chibimiroku
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2005-12-04 02:19:26]
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Re: ...that One Day on the Red Hills...
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by SocialMisfit on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:26:31 AM AEST
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man, i know the feeling, and i can easily relate, well done expressing yourself here.
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Re: ...that One Day on the Red Hills...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 04:01:18 PM AEST
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Well Vincent you know how much I love ur work. It's always a pleasure to read ur remarkable work my dear friend. I can relate to ur write so much. Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
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