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I Put My Pen To Ink
Contributed by
sararose1950
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Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 09:05:09 AM in AEST
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Again I put my pen to ink,
a cry for understanding, I think.
Every year as the days grow short,
my soul is taken-I must retort.
The demons whisper in my ear,
"Worthless!" I can hear it clear.
"Who are YOU to seek light and love?"
Am I seen, here, or above?
I spiral down into the dark abyss,
longing for an escape from this.
I grow weak- so tired of this battle,
words that I pen, they seem like prattle.
I know I am not in this alone.
I long for laughter- pick up the phone.
But I hide my pain, behind a voice of cheer..
Can anyone see me? Can anyone hear?
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Re: I Put My Pen To Ink
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 09:27:51 AM AEST
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Oh yes, you are seen and heard and so many hearts go out in sympathy and wish to assure you that you are infinitely loved by God and fellow men.
But it is so brave to come forward to admit that we have ups and downs and need each other.
Bravo ! courage is a great asset.!
Impressive peace of poetry.!
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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Re: I Put My Pen To Ink
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 10:12:37 AM AEST
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| As I have been where you are at...I hear you loud and clear. You are not alone my friend. Many understand....many are here. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: I Put My Pen To Ink
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:27:26 PM AEST
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| I feel you on this flow |
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Re: I Put My Pen To Ink
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by jessejames on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:31:51 PM AEST
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| good write i like it |
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Re: I Put My Pen To Ink
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by Jen54 on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:29:46 PM AEST
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Wonderful write!!
But I hide my pain, behind a voice of cheer..
Can anyone see me? Can anyone hear?
I relate to that part so well. Keep up the great work.
-Jen |
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Re: I Put My Pen To Ink
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 10:47:30 PM AEST
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Glad u put your pen and ink on this page a most beautiful write. enjoyed reading it, nice
flow via the heart.
Ben |
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Re: I Put My Pen To Ink
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 05:14:12 AM AEST
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| awsome write, you have manage to write exactly how I feel.Well done. |
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