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Invisibility
Contributed by
BlitzkriegAngel
on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 10:18:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When he walked by
My mind went black
I can never talk to him
It's confidence I lack
This cruel world
Where nothing's fair
Whatever I do
He'd never care
He gives me colour
Though he doesn't know
When he's not around
My time goes slow
The strong feelings inside me
If only he knew
There might be a chance that
My spirit will renew
"Tell him how you feel"?
That's mission impossible
'Cause he looked right through me
As if I was invisible
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BlitzkriegAngel
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2005-12-04 22:18:38]
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Re: Invisibility
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 11:18:49 PM AEST
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A big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope u enjoy it here.
This was an excellent first poem you've presented us with. I hope your crush notices you real soon. A very well written piece of poetry detailed well. Well done and keep penning.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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