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I Lost You To A Worse Cause
Contributed by
The_Callif
on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 11:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Oh, simply the thought of him having you
Makes me shake in utter and complete disgust
And the fact that I am no longer two
Makes me furious and angry with distrust
Down here I miss my tower and its view
And realize that this world is so unjust
For when you pushed down my tower you broke me
You dont how it feels, but Ill make you see.....
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2005-12-04 23:11:00]
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Re: I Lost You To A Worse Cause
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by girltranscended on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 11:43:37 PM AEST
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honestly, the best part, is the open ended threat at the end... although it is insane in itself.
Don't force yourself into a rhyme scheme - poetry is freer than you've expressed here. |
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