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Vision
Contributed by
tangle
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Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 01:33:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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if you had all
ambition only a word
could all mean anything
will has guided me
obscure obstacles that blind
it would put my heart to the test
at every corner never a rest
a vision oppressed
nothing less
imbalanced posture
never falling or fading
just introverted and escaping
this direction flows stark
it has little light
darkness has dismissed
another way persits
to have a vision
to have ambition
make your decision
Copyright ©
tangle
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2005-12-05 01:33:18]
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Re: Vision
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by Dri on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:44:52 PM AEST
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this is beautiful... such good flow, and it sounds so good when read out loud.
you should comment on more people's poetry. the more you comment, the more people know you, the more they try and seek you out. |
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