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The Dreaded Ex Boi
Contributed by
sophie_taylor
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Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:17:41 AM in AEST
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The Dreaded Ex Boi
I wait by the phone everyday
Waiting for you to call
Now I know I shouldnt have told you
Not even at all
You thought that it would be funny
To go tell all your mates
That I liked you, that I loved you
That was your biggest trait
Ive slit my wrists, Ive slammed the door
All because of you
Whyd you ring, Whyd you txt
When you knew that we are through
By Sophie Taylor
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2005-12-05 02:17:41]
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Re: The Dreaded Ex Boi
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:26:06 AM AEST
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PLEASE COMMENT!!
Sophie xoxo |
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Re: The Dreaded Ex Boi
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by Iris1126 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:30:39 AM AEST
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Ok, I like this poem. Only one thing that I think you should take a look at.
"That was your biggest trait". What kind of trait was it? A good trait, or a bad trait?
xxoo
iris
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