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back on track
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 05:49:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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walking home feeling alone with the hand of frost grabbing hold
seeing the light of a fire so bright as the bones in my body grows cold
tear in my eyes winds so wild i cant cry as the city streets become my home
night after night i make this treak threw this white my head laying where ever i roam
filling with fear of a end coming near my world comes crashing down
faded with frost i understand that i am lost trying to shovel frozen ground
empty inside with the pain i try to hide but it gets brought up every day
way on the day that my past fades away my soul will find peace to lay
down on the ground my flesh wearing down as knees i walk in this hell
put on the way i stumble every way trying to hold but i fell
deaths grim face a pleasure i could taste but my soul wont let me go
but as i face this rats bloody race i got lost in the pace and burried in the snow
i see you there with your heart that i care but your coldness pushes me away
fight to keep right the smile thats so right but seeing hope fade on you today
you trapped under ice which you think its so nice closing all feeling you display
but fire in your spirit you hardley can see it you wish the world would go astray
but i love you this is so true and my love wont fade to black
i just need to to find the true me and to get my life back on track
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lostrelic
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2005-12-05 17:49:24]
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Re: back on track
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by Ari on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 06:14:41 PM AEST
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very nice write...the ending really hit home, i feel like we all have something like that going through our heads
thank you for a good write
peace, love, happiness always
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