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Soldiers
Contributed by
Faded-Whisper
on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 06:45:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Like Skeptical Soldiers
You dance in these rows, so fragmentated.
Dulled eyes, once pure and alight.
If color were familiar to thou, perhaps it would fade differently.
Caring at the corner line, a music playing softly, breathless they've become.
Nothing.
A moments prayer, brought the realization to that silent doll.
If this is your passion, I should leave it at the end.
But knowing
Is the curled razors piercing softer skin.
Like Downed Soldiers
Watching from the outskirts.
Wishing one could stop this
The hues that only they can invision.
Autumn rising before winters early dawn.
Repeating, what is left.
This moment is my lifetime.
Falsely reassuring you, my friend.
That you are one, but different, shielded from the end.
It flows like summer waters, a flower standing lone.
Watching as it's comrades, fall to tainted calls.
And if watching yourself fall
Is my presentation
Knowing you won't be caught
For your saviors dead on location.
Breathing, I know it should be your last.
I've looked into your stone eyes, waiting for emotion.
But never once have I been able to face my own.
If I am like them, they are one with me.
Like bleeding soldiers.
Left in the wake of the battlefield.
Copyright ©
Faded-Whisper
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2005-12-05 18:45:42]
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Re: Soldiers
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:44:31 PM AEST
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Excellent! A very poetic write with great imagery. You see the world through a poet's eyes my friend.
Very well written
Larry |
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Re: Soldiers
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:55:39 PM AEST
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i liked this
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Re: Soldiers
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 09:39:16 PM AEST
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A smashing piece of poetry penned so brilliantly. The imagery and the flow sensational. Well done and thanks for sharing ur great work with us.
*hugs*
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