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How she moves me
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:29:10 PM in AEST
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I have to wonder
What is it about her that
Moves me so
What is it about her that
Puts me in a loss of words
When I am around her
Is it her eyes and how she looks at me?
How she looks at me when I make her smile
Is it the way she laughs almost quiet like
I can think of so many things
That amaze me about her
But what is it that moves me most
Is it the way she moves
As if she was not being watched
But she is
I cant help my self
The way she looks when she is
Fixing her hair into a bun or tail
Is it the way she looks when reading?
I would give anything to have her look at me
The way she does the words on every page she reads
Have her eyes light up when she passes a line or stanza
That moves her the way she moves me
Oh what am I to do
There is nothing I would want more
Than to be able to tell her how I feel
And to have her say she feels the same way
But we are just friends
I see her every day
And when I do my day just seems
So unbelievably good
I feel good when I see her
God help me what am I to do?
I feel as if I should let this pass and fade
I cannot stand feeling some thing for some one
Having them know it and not share it
So I would rather her not know and keep my feelings to my self
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Re: How she moves me
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:35:06 PM AEST
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Honesty...the honesty of this is breath taking and heart breaking. I would think that any woman who would read these words meant for her, and not see the beauty that is in your heart...well....if she can walk away unmoved she wasnt worht the time you took to put this into ink. Show her
Beautiful and moving
Very well done
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Re: How she moves me
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by tears_of_blood on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 08:00:48 PM AEST
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| i thought this poem was so good i am the same way but i let my feelings out and i think you have to because its worth every thing take a chance and jump in youll like whta you get iam sure good write. |
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Re: How she moves me
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 12:23:39 AM AEST
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| I'm glad you've found someone you like, that's good, now tell her how you feel, hehe, Another amazing poem. |
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