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My Room
Contributed by
honeychild8915
on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 08:32:00 PM in AEST
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I lay here all alone
in the darkness of my room.
with nothing but this pen and paper,
to express my inner demand.
The door is shut
curtins are closed.
Light is off and im finally alone,
In the darkness of my room.
I lay in bed with feelings left unsaid.
I lay under the covers,
Protecting myself from the world,
Outside my room.
My room is dark and peaceful
for the love and passion has come to an end.
i look around at the four bare walls
that surround me and keep me in my room.
This room is the only room
that knows the real me.
My room knows my pain,
and all my darkest secrets.
The walls of my room
protect the secrets from all of the world.
They store it iall in a box,
that ive come to call my room
The sun begins to rise as its now morning.
Trying to peak through the colsed window, the sun.
of the dark and painful box
My room.
It is another day
I must leave this place
to find an everlasting happiness
in my true loves arms, outside this room.
though pain and memories
are not always with me,
they will forever be kept in a box
known as my room.
Copyright ©
honeychild8915
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2005-12-05 20:32:00]
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Re: My Room
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by cashncoe on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 09:01:30 PM AEST
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AWSOME WRITE
YOU SHOULD CHECK OUT OUTLAW_MUTINY HE WRITES SOME REALY GREAT STUFF |
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Re: My Room
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 09:04:43 PM AEST
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atleast ur walls dont speak letting out ur secrets to those who dont need to know,seems like u stay in ur room bc of u feel safe there and no one is around for u to let out ur secrets which could b the way u like it to b,either way i love ur poem and no worries i use to spend endless hours in my room and felt free of the world out side 1 day killing my happiness!!awesome write keep up the great work!!
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Re: My Room
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 10:32:26 PM AEST
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A painful write, but a nice read.
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Re: My Room
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 11:10:11 PM AEST
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| This is a great piece. I wrote something along these lines awhile ago. It's also about your room, and the connection you have with it. You might wanna check it out for fun. Click here to check it out |
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Re: My Room
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by andyp89057 on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:05:13 PM AEST
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| Wow some deep emotion. oh course I guess i understand it alittle more since i do know a few things about you.. |
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Re: My Room
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by marie on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:30:21 PM AEST
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| i feel the same way. its kinda like a safe haven. very well written. |
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