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Cry, baby, cry
Contributed by
Faddy
on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 11:18:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Cry it all out
Hold it all in
only the pillow will know
for you keep to yourself
your tight little secrets
bundled inside your head
So cry, baby, cry
no one will hear
no one else cares
so why let them know?
The pillow's the shoulder
no one will lend you
So cry, baby, cry
and only the pillow will know
Copyright ©
Faddy
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2005-12-05 23:18:11]
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Re: Cry, baby, cry
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 12:27:47 AM AEST
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This is a pretty good write, well done.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Cry, baby, cry
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by Shnannon on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:30:55 AM AEST
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This is really sweet and simple
I love it
Sometimes the pillow seems like the only one who actually cares...at least for me
Keep up the good work |
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Re: Cry, baby, cry
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by marie on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:43:21 PM AEST
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| i could feel what you were feeling. so true. great poem. |
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