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into the shadows
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 02:57:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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walk forth
into the night
into the shadows
and away from the light
don't look back
forget your past
you are home
and safe at last
don't be scared
you're welcome here
you're where you belong
so you've nothing to fear
so walk into the night
and away from the day
here in the shadows
is where you shall stay
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Re: into the shadows
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by tiggytom on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:41:28 AM AEST
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| I like this, we all live amidst our shadow which we just cant resist in the end :) |
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Re: into the shadows
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 02:49:49 PM AEST
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It's short, well rhymed and i like it a lot. My fave stanza
has to be:
so walk into the night
and away from the day
here in the shadows
is where you shall stay
the whole piece is amazing
keep it up! |
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Re: into the shadows
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 04:58:53 AM AEST
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| well done , nice flow to it. |
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