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not promising

Contributed by igba on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 11:22:21 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

i can"t promise you a castle
i offer my warm hut instead

i can"t promise you a fortune
the path to success i"ll point out

i can"t promise to be there always
i"m just human afterall

i can"t promise you eternal happiness
a source of sorrow i"ll not be

i can"t promise you immortality
to mortality we must bow

i can"t promise you eternal happiness
it"s not mine to grant

but i promise you my love
which i cannot suppress any longer

Copyright © igba ... [ 2005-12-06 11:22:21]
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Re: not promising (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:53:35 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.

wwwhhhhhoo could ask for more?
huggs,
emy

Re: not promising (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 03:23:40 PM AEST
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wow i like this piece .. i like the choice of words and everything.. and i love the end of this thanks for sharing.. its a very powerful write

JENNI

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