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Hermaphrodite Humor
Contributed by
Jyssvw
on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:50:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Hemorrhaging calamity
Liquid lost
Pistol tossed
To the bottom stars
Double crossed
Handshakes worth
The skin
Wraps the palm
Mutual benefit
Didactic predicament
Two-folds to the center
Diabolic prism
Chewed food
Reverse regurgitation
A deep hole
Protruding vegetation
Factory line
Of fun
Give pleasure
Or no outcome
Antique ivory
The tooth
Of a killer whale
Hung from the neck
Vintage porcelain
A vase
Filled with roses
Dry of soil
Stick around
Last seat in the house
Countdown
Until the fun starts
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw
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2005-12-06 19:50:57]
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Re: Hermaphrodite Humor
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:41:41 AM AEST
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perfect flow throughout. wish I could do this.
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Re: Hermaphrodite Humor
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:57:46 AM AEST
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| no idea wot it was about, loved it :-) |
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Re: Hermaphrodite Humor
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:51:13 AM AEST
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As per usual, I'm left wondering about your title usage! Ummm...okay...is that your secret?? lol: ) As for this write, it's very cryptic, but it seems to be a painful one. I like the way you started it off, you just dove right into the deep end, and immersed the reader instantly. Good job.
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Re: Hermaphrodite Humor
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by slogan on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 12:16:22 AM AEST
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| great job..jh |
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