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why me?
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 08:15:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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THE RAIN BEATS DOWN
ON A YOUNG BOYS FACE
AS HE WONDERS WHAT HE'S DOING
IN SUCH A DARK PLACE
EVERYTHING IS NEW
AND EVERYONE IS A STRANGER
HE'S NOT SURE WHAT IS SAFE
AND WHAT IS DANGER
ALL THE OTHER KIDS
RUN AROUND AND PLAY
BUT THIS LITTLE BOY PRAYS
HE DOESN'T HAVE TO STAY
HE'S NOT COMPLETLY ALONE
HE STILL HAS BIG BROTHER
STILL HE WANTS TO GO HOME
STILL HE WANTS HIS MOTHER
FOR THE PAST THREE NIGHTS
HE'S CRIED HIMSELF TO SLEEP
HAVING MADE MEMORIES
HE 'LL NEVER WISH TO KEEP
HE KNEELS DOWN TO PRAY
NOT SURE WHERE TO BEGIN
SO HE JUST BEGS GOD
TO BRING HIM HOME AGAIN
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2005-12-06 20:15:35]
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Re: why me?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 08:17:04 PM AEST
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Very sweet, gentle, but I wouldn't use caps it's kind of hard on the eyes, otherwise a great write.
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Re: why me?
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by crzywhtegrl on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 09:22:31 PM AEST
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| hey nice job i like it someone told me come to your name cuz i would like ur poems er somthing and i liked it lol :) |
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Re: why me?
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:32:02 AM AEST
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touched me deeply with this one.
I hope that the pain in your heart mends.
I felt this.
Michelle |
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Re: why me?
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:00:19 AM AEST
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A sad, touching poem that hits at the heart. I feel ur pain through ur words. I hope and pray that ur heart heals real soon. A very well penned piece of poetry.
*heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~ |
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Re: why me?
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:46:34 PM AEST
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very nice poem^_^ i liked it....
keep up the good work.
Merry christmas:) n a happy new year^_^ |
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