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But A While
Contributed by
Sinned
on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 05:25:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Laying there Rebecca
Painted rosy cheeks
Pretty white dress
All ready for dance
I linger
But awhile
A little white chest
Presented to who
Joey so still in lace
Pain fills a mother breast
But Awhile
Curtis on Christmas eve
Maternal lives but doesn't survive
Pain overcomes mothers heart
Depression no one could believe
But Awhile
Aunt uncle mother father
Time quickly passes
Yet time lingers
Sisters and brothers
But awhile
Kind words said then forgoten
A friend is called
Then another
Memories then and when
But a while
A mother leaves at forty-one
A son sobs uncontrollable
Daughters mother one another
Toughtness covers the son
But awhile
A father becomes great great
Meanness gives way to a little child
Love is tender at ninty-two
Then life has met it's date
But awhile
Here we linger
Toil and tears
Smiles of happiness
Thinking not of creations finger
But awhile
Time stands still
Breath our spirit
Taken away
Eternity doing His will
But awhile
Time is but a thousand years
Together we sing His praise
A thousand years is but a day
In an instant no more tears
Forever a smile
Yet here we toil
In happiness and pain
Never thinking it is but awhile
Sinned
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Sinned
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2005-12-07 05:25:34]
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Re: But A While
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:31:45 AM AEST
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| v nice :-) |
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Re: But A While
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 09:23:02 AM AEST
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Impressive write, great emotion.
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Re: But A While
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by Desolated_Denial on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 12:52:07 PM AEST
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wow, I like the time-line aspect to it, it reads like a story.
Impressive.
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Re: But A While
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by STECKS on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:59:29 PM AEST
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| very well done, Emotion can be felt. Very Nice |
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Re: But A While
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by STECKS on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 12:05:42 PM AEST
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| Very Nice. Emotion was definitly felt. Keep up the nice write. |
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