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I Ache
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I close my eyes and can almost feel your skin against my lips
I visualise your gorgeous hands and feel them on my hips
Looking deep into your eyes seems to take up most of my time
And I could dream forever of the chance that you'd be mine
I drive around in circles because you make me lose my way
I think about you constantly as within my mind you play
Staring into space with a smile 10 feet wide
I think of you and cannot control the urgency inside
The need to run into your arms and never turn away
To bury my face into your chest and love you night and day
So many things I ache to do,to show how much I care
But this dream I have is mine alone,it wasn't built to share
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-01-24 06:20:00]
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Re: I Ache
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 06:27:30 AM AEST
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Tottally awesome and I can totally relate.
Welcome!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: I Ache
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 06:35:38 AM AEST
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Good write.... enjoyed this very much.. keep them coming..
Jenni |
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Re: I Ache
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 08:05:43 AM AEST
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Just beautiful babe! sigh....you always leave me with such a warm tingle inside. I knew you'd like ypdc too! Glad you're here and great write as always ( Blondie) . hehe
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Re: I Ache
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 08:28:18 AM AEST
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| Oh, such a monderful feeling to have and even better when you can put it to words, THX. |
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Re: I Ache
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by roisin on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 09:36:38 AM AEST
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a warm welcome....have read everything you've posted to date and i am in awe!!! so senuous, vivid, heart stirring...mmmm..delicious writes!!!!!
ta
rosie |
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Re: I Ache
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 01:13:17 PM AEST
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Another beautiful piece ...passionate and sensual and well written.
Chrissie |
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Re: I Ache
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:38:01 PM AEST
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| So sweet and lovely... welcome to ypdc and my best to you both:) |
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Re: I Ache
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by audreyann on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 08:03:29 PM AEST
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| I love this poem,i know exactly how it its to feel like that. |
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Re: I Ache
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 11:27:34 AM AEST
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| This is such a great write. This is the first poem that I have read of your and now I am going to read more! Love:::Kirby |
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