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Don't Rely on Me
Contributed by
Shmokin
on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:35:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Dont rely on me
You dont need me
Are you mad?
I bring misery
I'm just sad
I dont want to be needed
Because I am not strong
Dont rely on me
I'll only get it wrong
Dont care, I'm not worth it
I'm a wrongun' thats for sure
Dont waste your life on me
Looking for a cure
I'm dragging you down
It breaks my heart
My misery
I dont want you to be a part
Your happiness
Is a burden to me
I cant have
Such responsibility
Walk away please
Let me drown
You dont need tears
or your face to frown
I'm hollow and empty
Of no use at all
I am not a person
You can rely on to call
I'll just let you down
I'll make you cry
I dont want that
Do you wonder why?
It's not within my power
Or yours, or thiers or Gods
I just dont work properly
Mistimed brain cogs
Not in sync
An erratic rythmn
Keeps me here
In my prison.
XShmokinX
Copyright ©
Shmokin
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2005-12-09 06:35:14]
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Re: Don't Rely on Me
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:43:45 AM AEST
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Very beasutifull write even in it's sadness.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Don't Rely on Me
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by STECKS on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:41:29 AM AEST
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| Very good poem for sadness. This topic is something most people deal with eventually. Enjoyed the writing alot .... Keep up the nice work. |
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Re: Don't Rely on Me
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by thumper on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:52:52 PM AEST
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Nice work. I know the feeling. Sometimes it doesn't matter what you do, it just seems that everything goes wrong. Keep your chin up, it'll all work out. It always does. You're here for a reason. (Gotta believe that or else what do we have? lol) Peace to you.
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: Don't Rely on Me
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by marie on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:23:36 PM AEST
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| uh huh i know what you mean. its okay though. |
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Re: Don't Rely on Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 11:49:10 PM AEST
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Wow, does this ever remind me of someone...Such a shame that some people feel this way about themselves. It's simply not true, unless you honestly want to hurt loved ones...I like the emotion you've expressed here, but I hope for your sake you make a change for the better, if this is true.
Scorp. |
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Re: Don't Rely on Me
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by STECKS on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 12:07:49 PM AEST
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| Very sad poem. Felt that pain before. Impressive Write. |
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Re: Don't Rely on Me
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by BondiDan on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 02:25:23 AM AEST
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That was a brilliant write
felt that so deeply
very very well written
the deep honesty in this poem something you very rarely see these days in poetry and is something one truly respects
Good work! |
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Re: Don't Rely on Me
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 11:47:25 PM AEST
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I have felt that way before. This is a great poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Don't Rely on Me
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 09:24:32 PM AEST
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A very good poem..But sad in a way..
God Bless! |
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