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Faith
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:42:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've never seen
the wind
that moves
a Willow
Yet not seeing
still I know
that it
is there
I've never touched
a rainbow's
brilliant
colors
Yet not touching
still they dance
upon
the air
I've never heard
the sound
of lovers
dreaming
Yet not hearing
still their wishes
can
come true
Sometimes faith
is all the proof
that's ever
needed
Please have faith
my darling
in my love
for you
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
... [
2005-12-09 10:42:08]
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Re: Faith
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by Shmokin on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:51:42 AM AEST
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| Aww v sweet :-) |
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Re: Faith
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by Kamal on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:22:47 AM AEST
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HOT if i was a girl I would rock your world..
Peace God.
One. |
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Re: Faith
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 03:28:56 PM AEST
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| WOW!! Great concepts here. You have put into words what I so often just feel.....very impressive! |
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Re: Faith
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by ever1der on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 04:33:53 PM AEST
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| nice. |
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Re: Faith
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by ever1der on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 04:35:08 PM AEST
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| actually raker, it isn't all that short. |
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Re: Faith
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 05:29:17 PM AEST
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sue *applauds* Larry on penning down such an awesome write. I love ur work. Remarkable and always worth reading.
A round of drinks on me this time Larry. Here's to you buddy...
Hugs from ur fan/friend,
~sue~ |
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Re: Faith
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:13:12 PM AEST
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Smiles*..amazing Poem Larry truly beautiful
~Clark |
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Re: Faith
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 01:09:42 AM AEST
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"I've never heard
the sound
of lovers
dreaming"
Beautiful Larry I loved it all... you are
amazing. Thanks for sharing this wonderful
piece.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Faith
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:57:51 AM AEST
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| Nice poem mate =) |
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Re: Faith
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by seci on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 02:24:44 PM AEST
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| i like this poem. it is qutie different. i like the way you use the stanzas. you must be new, because i don't recall seeing your name as much on the website, but continue to write and i will really read. |
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Re: Faith
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 10:05:50 PM AEST
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*siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
'nuff said.
~Snemmy
(who particularly liked the opening and who found the closing... just... beautiful) |
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Re: Faith
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 08:42:08 PM AEST
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| Talk about wearing your heart on your sleeve. I hope you survived |
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