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ILL NEVER MAKE IT TO THAT PROMISED LAND
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
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Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:49:10 PM in AEST
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i drink so hard to escape the things i feel pain and sorrow comes and goes but nothings ever real i've done things i regret but reprucition hasn't found me yet i've been so far gone i could barely stand I'LL NEVER MAKE IT TO THAT PROMISED LAND i've done my share of paying dues no matter how hard i search im outta clues i've said things a man should never say i'm never surprised when things don't go my way as i whipe the blood from my dying hand I'LL NEVER MAKE IT TO THAT PROMISED LAND i've had love and i've had lust but never a soul i could trust i have let all of my good friends down guess thats why they cant be found i seem to have led myself astray it seems i'll be lost till my dying day good days are but a grain of sand I'LL NEVER MAKE IT TO THAT PROMISED LAND i've broken some hearts including my own so it serves me right to die alone my days are numbered so i've been told well thats fine cause this life is getting old i've been so vein never excepting a hand I'LL NEVER MAKE IT TO THAT PROMISED LAND i spend my time drownding in sorrow too good to steal too proud to borrow i'm weary and old beyond my years all the great lakes couldn't hold my tears as the angel of death takes my hand I'LL NEVER MAKE IT TO THAT PROMISED LAND
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Re: ILL NEVER MAKE IT TO THAT PROMISED LAND
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 06:07:06 AM AEST (User
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Very strong, enlightening write.
U break it down for the reader one feels the agony yet one can see how briliant of a writer u r.
huggs,
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