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Goddess Of Morning
Contributed by
dobad
on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 11:53:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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On cold winters morning, glistening and crisp
She rises as the sun, glowing, warm welcome given
She blesses this day with her precious gifts
Warmth, love, beauty, passion, carried on winds eternal
She gazes towards skies, pale and gray
Waning stars blinking their passing farewells
The moon bows it's sad departure
Awaiting it's return to bid her goodnight
Leaves rising up from the ground around her
Encircle her, inviting her to join their dance
Moist grasses caressing her feet
Wish only to comfort each step she may take
Cool gentle winds softly kissing her cheeks
Find tears of joy in their passing
Pay homage to her
This Goddess of morning
The birds of morning awaken
Singing to her their songs of welcome
Touching her heart
With soft voice, she joins their chorus
All Things know peace with her presence
This creature of light, and love
Each day of life begins anew, with promise
Knowing this Goddess has blessed it's dawning
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dobad
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Re: Goddess Of Morning
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by The_Callif on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 11:58:34 AM AEST
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good write, i really like stanza - "Leaves rising up from the ground around her
Encircle her, inviting her to join their dance
Moist grasses caressing her feet
Wish only to comfort each step she may take"
keep it up
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Re: Goddess Of Morning
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 12:56:27 PM AEST
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| wow- hats off to da teacher!!!- beautiful write........Peace and Light |
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Re: Goddess Of Morning
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by Jessica_Saini on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 01:18:36 PM AEST
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very mystical and magickal. I liked it.
~Jessica Saini |
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Re: Goddess Of Morning
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by slogan on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 02:28:15 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem...great write..jh |
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Re: Goddess Of Morning
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by jessejames on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:49:09 PM AEST
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keep being hopefull
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Re: Goddess Of Morning
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:12:58 PM AEST
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| beautifully written , well done |
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