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Come to Guy
Contributed by
The_Cowardly_Lion
on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:17:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I know where youve been
I know you
I know who you are
I know you
Its getting late and im too tired to talk
So please just leave and dont come back
Did you think id smile? And hold you?
Be there for you when youre down?
When somebody gives you the cold sholder
Will I be your come to guy?
Well thats not me darlin, thats not me.
Open your eyes now, cant you see
Id have treat you right. But you know that.
Better than all those guys you came to me about.
But you werent looking for happiness
You werent looking for mr right
Youre just living in agony
And taking me for the ride
But Come to Guy and his soon-not-to-be-bride
Are making the same maistakes again
I know where youve been
I know you
I know who you are
I know you
Its getting late and im too tired to talk
So please just leave and dont come back
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Re: Come to Guy
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by Ari on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:48:53 PM AEST
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incredible write, well done.
I know this feeling like the back of my hand, and it's definately not fun. Although when you realise it you get to move on, which it seems like you are on your way to doing.
Great write, keep up the good work...
peace, love, happiness always
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Re: Come to Guy
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:43:14 AM AEST
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Incredible writing.
huggs,
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Re: Come to Guy
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by Clarity_Rising on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 12:06:14 AM AEST
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Excellent description of the pain
of being used. I like your strength in
this poem, not succumbing to this
lover’s wishes. Lovely write!
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