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That Old House down the street
Contributed by
skc_cutie
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 12:36:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The windows are shattered
The door no longer swings
That old doorbell has broken
From those million past rings
Hushed whispers from the neighbors
Of the past nights disaster
Graffiti upon the walls
Pursued by tears of laughter
The families despair
This once loving home
From which a family dispersed
Is covered in vines
Is covered in ashes
From all the weathers worst
The vines grow tall upon
The security of that beaten down house
The aged floorboards
Scream in hurt
As the footsteps trail above
I walk among the ruins
Left from this once
Brilliant house
The doormat is dismembered
From each bit of heel
Each piece of graffiti
To signify whats real
This once loving home
Is now a shattered
Down dream
Copyright ©
skc_cutie
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2005-12-12 12:36:27]
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Re: That Old House down the street
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:04:49 PM AEST
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| Nice imagery, paints a good picture, good write, thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: That Old House down the street
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:43:43 PM AEST
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like our world we neglect so much great write
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